He turned round to show someone. Four thousand miles away, Pop Pop was already clapping.
The photo usually gets there. What happened around it often doesn't: the wobble, the shout, the look on his face just before.
An illustrative example
From the note you'd scribble, to the moment Pop Pop gets.
Pop Pop, he built a tower of three cushions in the hallway tonight, all on his own. The moment the last one stayed up, he spun round and shouted for someone to come and see.
A fictional family, shown as an example. Nothing gets added that you didn't write.
Your turn
They already see a lot. Which one didn't make it through?
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